Katie
I'm sad to say that I agree with Patrick. You have a lot of information and it's all kind of going out in different directions. Maybe you could find a way to tie it all together. Your thesis was good in the beginning but it seems that you have strayed slightly, and the overflow of information seems that you just put everything pertintent to the general subject. It is evident that you have done quite a bit of work but I am not quite sure if you could stay with your original thesis.
But it is pretty good. Good Job!
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